OUGD501.RESUBMISSION. IMPROVEMENT OF ESSAY.

After the first failed attemped and a chat with Richard it was clearified taht THE ESSAY was the flaw in the submission. I will be doing some seperate reaserch to ADD to my previous one and re-write the essay in the time that I have. So it happens that I am leaving to Lithuania on the 1st of August for the month and realisticly don't think I am going to have time there. SO my plane is to organize all my information and re-write the essay in a month, which is going to be complicated with no language help. But I will try to do my best. I re-read the essay many times and now I know I need to change a bit because some of it doesn't even make sence now.